Melissa_M
Member since Aug-23-02
326 posts, 6 feedbacks,
Jan-22-03, 12:36 PM ()
1. "RE: Girl - WIP"
It's cute, and looking good so far! I don't know if you're done with the hair, yet, but I think it could use some more darks. I think overall the drawing may also need some more blending with a cloth/Q-tips. Keep it up--I know it's a lot of work, but it's rewarding, too, when it's all done!
- Melissa (aka: Honey Bee)
gleninca
Member since Dec-23-02
41 posts, 1 feedbacks,
Jan-25-03, 11:39 PM ()
2. "RE: Girl - WIP"
Hi Glenn, it's going well, I think you need to bring in some more darks though, and get some blending happening. perhaps something softer than a 2b:-)
http://www.geocities.com/gleninca Nature is not something that can be seen by the eye alone- it lies also within the soul, in pictures seen by the inner eye. -Munch
Bella
Member since Sep-13-02
347 posts, 4 feedbacks,
Jan-25-03, 11:49 PM ()
3. "RE: Girl - WIP"
Hi Glenn, I'm looking forward to seeing updates! I really like the composition!
He who works with his hands is a laborer. He who works with his hands and his head is a craftsman. He who works with his hands and his head and his heart is an artist. St Fancis of Assisi
Bill_Johnston
Member since Nov-9-02
143 posts, 5 feedbacks,
Jan-27-03, 06:00 PM ()
4. "RE: Girl - WIP"
Great drawing Glenn. You have really captured a mood with her pose. I agree with the others on darkening some of the values, especially in the eyes, and maybe in the details on the bow and in the shadow areas of her hair and face. The blending is up to you. Personally, I am a hopeless "blendaholic", but I really admire those who can achieve realism without so much blending. Keep up the great work!
