Hi Vicklyn,
I hesitate to speak here because I am so new at this.Trouble is I am opinionated and therefore usually have something to say. So take it for what it's worth.I like the drawing, you have done a great job. If you wnat to make your victim..oops...subject look younger try to smooth out some of the lines, but be careful, that can also change some opf the character.
I did a full figure of my wife (she was gracious enough to pose for me) but she said I made her look too fat. I quickly told her, I made a mistake. Then I proceded to blend some of the darker lines into the area and eureka, she lost 20 lbs.
Keep drawing, you're doing great.
Steve