WarHorseLover
Member since Aug-26-02
185 posts, 4 feedbacks,
Oct-20-02, 02:48 AM ()
"finished daughter?"
Here is my daughter almost finished. I thought I was but when I looked at these I noticed that the jaw line was too squared. She has a double chin and asked/ told me not to put that in a drawing and I ended up giving her a hard jawline. I went over it and softened it in the original but have not taken a photo of that yet. Here it was up until then.
Equine and Western Art by: S. Baldwin
Melissa_M
Member since Aug-23-02
326 posts, 6 feedbacks,
Oct-22-02, 03:41 PM ()
1. "RE: finished daughter?"
Hi, Stephanie. Good job! I haven't been here in a while since I've been busy and didn't know how to find the page again (I typed in just artpapa.com like I used to and it didn't come up on the days I tried it). So, I hope I'm not too late with my advice. There are just a few things I noticed...Her mouth doesn't look wide enough (in the photo it goes out if farther if you compare it with the nose). I noticed what you said about the jaw, but since you said you fixed that, I'll not say anything about it. In the photo, her eyes seem to go down and out farther on the sides (a crease line). Anyway, it's a great drawing--keep up the great work!
In the photo, her eyes seem to go down and out farther on the sides (a crease line). Anyway, it's a great drawing--keep up the great work!