Wow! very nice so far. I find jelled hair to be really tough because there's not a lot of midtones, it's usually all highlight and shadow. When I'm drawing hair I find that I draw just as much with an eraser as i do pencil, pulling out highlights and then softening with a tortillion. The one thing I never do is, rush hair!! What's the sense of spending hours rendering beautiful skin tones to only plant a head of cabbage on top!
I like what you have so far the "King" Is looking Good!!
Marc Forest.
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