Rebecca

Member since Jan-4-03
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Feb-27-03, 03:43 PM () |
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2. "RE: Zebra"
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Hi Duke, this is a really atmospheric piece and I love the placidity you've captured in the eye. Pastel scares me, but it looks like you've got a great smooth finish - almost looks like paint (but that could be the quality of the photo....). One thing really does stick out for me on this though, and it's the neck. It is to straight and narrow - really need thickening and perhaps adding a subtle curve down in the direction of the chest. It also looks like you missed a stripe near the edge of the page, which looks a little odd when you compare it to the density of the stripes on the rest of its head and neck. Becky. |
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